i know i suck at writing (maybe 10% of the stuff i have written is ok), let's see what Copilot (ChatGPT) does with my partially unwritten "song" Cacophony (Post 958). Scroll down for original version (after "comments") or tab Post 958 to compare and contrast.
Copilot (Chat GTP) Version:
It was a symphony in every moment
A harmony I couldn't name
And didn't want to waste
Now all I hear are jarring notes
Am I the only one who knows
Two hearts out of sync
Can't find the right beat
Where did our symphony go
Shattered and sunk, no longer in tune
Can't hear love's melody
The only song left for me
Is a cacophony, a cacophony
Comments: overall, a decent version. Better than mine? Debatable. Though it dumbs down word choice. Also feels like it misses what i was saying, though maybe that's a good thing. Possible it is worded better and more coherent - unfortunately, that is not exactly what i was going for.
"Song": using musical terms for a relationship as a symphony that failed. "crashed and broke, no longer afloat" referred to the relationship. Deliberate word/phrase choice of "discordant tones" (not musical notes, something that sounds wrong and not melodic). "Am i in this alone" is much different than the AI version ("am i the only one that knows"). Maybe i should have hit the enter key after "discordant tones" - seems like a different thought. Tones plays with the last word in the next line (alone)
Original:
Every moment felt like a symphony
Harmony that i couldn't place
And didn't want to waste
Now all i hear is discordant tones
Am i in this alone
Two hearts out of sync
Can't find the right beat
What has happened to our symphony
Crashed and broke, no longer afloat
Can't hear loves melody
The only song playing for me
Sounds like a cacophony, a cacophony
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